X-Recipient: archive-cygwin AT delorie DOT com X-Spam-Check-By: sourceware.org From: korz_fred AT emc DOT com Content-class: urn:content-classes:message MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="----_=_NextPart_001_01C8D7DB.F595FAA5" Subject: Copy edits for 'cygwin-ug-net/using-effectively.html' - patch and changelog entry Date: Thu, 26 Jun 2008 18:28:28 -0400 Message-ID: <6B57DE2D690C194C962C7F41E24043CA093E2464@CORPUSMX40A.corp.emc.com> To: X-Tablus-Inspected: yes X-Tablus-Classifications: X-Tablus-Action: X-IsSubscribed: yes Mailing-List: contact cygwin-help AT cygwin DOT com; run by ezmlm List-Id: List-Subscribe: List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: , Sender: cygwin-owner AT cygwin DOT com Mail-Followup-To: cygwin AT cygwin DOT com Delivered-To: mailing list cygwin AT cygwin DOT com ------_=_NextPart_001_01C8D7DB.F595FAA5 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I was catching up on the documentation (which I last read years ago) and as I read for content I spotted a few copy editing problems (subject-verb agreement, "and" instead of "are", preposition and article choice). According to the archives the 'cygwin' list is the one to which to send user guide patches. [Thread "Where to send corrections for user's manual ?", Igor Pechtchanski and Christopher Faylor, Oct 20, 2002]. Such patches didn't fit any of the (other) lists. Attached are (1) ChangeLog entry per the pointers in http://cygwin.com/contrib.html and the GNU ChangeLog standards and (2) unified diff against the anon cvs sources (as of about 2200GMT 20080626). It's been quite a few years since I've last contributed to projects (e.g. elisp manual in 1990s, gmake test builds, etc). Given the overhead (pointer chasing, etc, etc), I hope these changes make it into the tree and the online docs. 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